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Burningpaw - REF/Application for The-Six-Clans by FlareAKACuteFlareon Burningpaw - REF/Application for The-Six-Clans by FlareAKACuteFlareon
:new:Fixed description and updated his application; I don't care if there is coding mistakes in the description, I have literally given this fixed description for hour and half so Idc now if it doesn't look perfect


Name: Burningpaw
Age: 7moons (7 months)
Gender: Tom

Clan: :bulletblue:MistClan:bulletblue:
Rank: Apprentice


Appearance: Pale Ginger tabby tom with Ginger coloured tail and ears with dark Ginger tabby-markings,  White paws and pale Creamy-Brown eyes


Personality: Burningpaw is straight out said a trouble-maker. After his parents' and siblings' deaths he has lost positive look in the life and in the worst case he releases his pain on others. Maybe once he becomes a warrior he gets to understand world better?

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Family
Brightskies (dead) - Mother
Littlestar (dead) - Father
Vixenkit (dead)  - Sister
Cavernkit (dead) - Brother
Kindlekit (dead???) - Brother (or Sister???)
Carrotkit (dead) - Brother

Mate: **open (Crush part)**
Kits ---

Mentor: Frostfur

Apprentice: **Too young to train any**

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History:

Burningkit was born for Brightskies and Littlestar along with his sibblings, Vixenkit, Carrotkit, Kindlekit and Cavernkit, which Carrotkit and Kindlekit died right away and it didn't take long that also Cavernkit was dead also. Burningkit spent most of his time with Vixenkit or just wondering around the camp.
Littlestar, Burningkit's father, dies and Burningkit gets more determined about his dream to follow his father's pawsteps, no matter what it would take from him.
After Vixenkit's death, Burningkit tried to find someone else or elses to play with him and he soon found himself in a "competion" with Ripplekit, a she-kit younger than him. She though became an apprentice before him and he began to grow jelousity-ship towards her. Just before he was about to get apprentice as well, his mother Brightskies died too, leaving him to be only one left in his family. This drove him into despression that left him in the nursery for one more extra moon.
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After a very long and awaited time, Burningkit becomes finally a Burningpaw and gets Frostfur as his mentor **WIP**

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Relationships:

:bulletwhite:Don't know...
:bulletblue:Friend
:bulletgreen:Good Friend
:bulletyellow:Best Friend
:bulletpink:Crush
:bulletred:Love
:bulletblack:Hate/Jealousy/Dislike
:bulletorange:Respect
:bulletpurple:Family
:heart: Mate

:bulletred:FeatherClan:bulletred:

:bulletyellow:SparkClan:bulletyellow:

:bulletblue:MistClan:bulletblue:

1st thoughts: "I don't know her. I've only seen her in my camp"
2nd thoughts: "

thoughts: "I don't know her enough well too. Just the same as with Moonwing; I've only seen her in the camp"

thoughts: "He's great warrior! He even played with me when I was a kit..."

thoughts: "In the first place, she wouldn't have deserved to become a warrior before me! I should've left the nursery before her and be on the place she's now!"

thoughts: "Ripplewing's brother, I used to play with him when we were kits... We've distanced"

thoughts: "...I still think my father was the best leader this Clan could handle"

thoughts: "...She retried?"

thoughts: "Shadowkit's father...Who's from...ClawClan?"

thoughts: "He's a nice guy! He has got some energy and all...he's good to play/hang out with...We should spend more time"

thoughts: "Ripplewing's friend..."

thoughts: "a tom that Ripplewing used to spend a lot time with..."

:bulletpurple:TornadoClan:bulletpurple:

:bulletblack:ClawClan:bulletblack:

:bulletwhite:Other:bulletwhite:

:bulletgreen:StarClan:bulletgreen:

thoughts: "..."</small>

thoughts: "*sighs*...I am going to follow your pawsteps, father, and I promise to do my best to reach as high as you did"</small>

thoughts: "My bother...who's dead *sigh*"</small>

:bulletgreen::bulletred::bulletpurple:Vixenkit (Kittysprite)</small>
thoughts: "My sister and only she-kit in my litter! She's quiet but I still like to play with her"

thoughts: "Tom I've played few times with... He's also Dewstar's mate"

thoughts: "She's warrior of my Clan! He taught some fishing for me and Ripplepaw. She's nice"

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Other cats of mine in The-Six-Clans

Dustlight - FeatherClan
Duskflower - FeatherClan
Fallpetal - FeatherClan
Sorrelkit - FeatherClan
Flamedapple - SparkClan
Redpaw - SparkClan
Ripplewing - MistClan
Burningpaw - MistClan
Shadestream - TornadoClan
Bluepaw - TornadoClan
Froststar - ClawClan
Blaze - Rogue/Non Clan
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:iconmaplethemutt:
MapleTheMutt Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw on the mistclan news journal that diveshadow is his mentor? 
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Student
Oh is that so? 
Well I guess so then xD
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MapleTheMutt Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hm, odd. Aparrntly he is mentoring opalpaw and burningpaw
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Student
Oh well...o: Maybe we should mention something for rainsonq that Diveshadow is mentoring two apprentices?
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rainsonq Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's just because we're so short on warriors / v \
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student
Don't worry ;w; I get the pain!
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:iconmaplethemutt:
MapleTheMutt Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure, I'll just let her know but I'm pretty sure it's just the shortage of warriors 
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student
Yeah, she just replied to my comment about that xD Oh well
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FennyPii Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
hey want to RP him and Echopaw i mean hes so cute OwO
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student
Link the application?:3
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FennyPii Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student Digital Artist
right here owo fav.me/d8cl1i4
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student
Ooh she got very pretty design~ ^^
Sure we can do a roleplay! Wanna roleplay through notes or comments?:3 and do you wanna start?
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FennyPii Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student Digital Artist
oh! thanks Flare X3, um both Comments and Notes are fine for me, but i guess Notes is the best way
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student
Your welcome :3
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Sp0ttish Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey um,maybe do you want to pair them up when they get older? ;v; (By them,I mean him and Featherbreeze)
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Student
Umm sorry I am not really ship-ahead-planning xD;
I prefer roleplay those things out + I prefer to do it with someone who actually got somewhat nice level with roleplaying AKA roleplaying with at least 5 to 10 sentences per reply most of the time, preferably more.
Also I am planning Burningpaw/heart to be a forever alone guy and I have some things already planned for him so I am afraid Featherbreeze doesn't really have room there (This plot includes Burningpaw, my other cat Ripplewing and then Ripplewing's future mate)

So yeah...
Sorry but no ^^;
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Sp0ttish Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oooh okay then ^^
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Want to roleplay with Crowpaw again Flare? ^w^
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Student
Aah sure xD Could you start?c: Through notes maybe?
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014
Sure, the note has been sent :3
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Sp0ttish Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
rp? 'w'
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student
Link the application with who?:3
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Sp0ttish Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fav.me/d7zch5d Featherpaw c':
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student
Ah yes, sure!
Sorry for late reply xD;
But yeah... Notes or comments?c: And could you start?^^
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Sp0ttish Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay! c:
And it's fine ^^
Comments~And sure~!

Featherpaw yawned after she woke up out of the apprentice's den.She looked beside her to her beloved,Flamingpaw,but he was asleep.She quickly got up and made sure he didn't wake up.She padded out of the den,but the only cat there was Burningpaw."Oh,hi,Burningpaw!" said Featherpaw cheerfully as she padded up to him.
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Student
Burningpaw was at a pond not so far away from apprentices' den. He was standing in the middle of the pond, just judging how much he had grew from last time he was a kit. His ear flicked and he glanced at the sky before his ears prickled as someone said aloud his name. Glancing over his shoulder, he could see the she-cat that had greeted him. "Morning Featherpaw", He replied as he finally decided to get off from the pond that in the reality was only at half way of his knee.
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Sp0ttish Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"What are you doing?"asked Featherpaw as she went and stood beside him.
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Student
"Nothing much really... Just... Eh yeah. Nothing special really." Burningpaw replied, deciding to keep the memories part by himself and gave a quick groom at his other fore paw and drew it over his ear. "What're you doing? Woke up?" He asked in return, mainly wanting to be polite.
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Nazoinu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
;w; It's so sad...all his family are gone...:saddummy:
I do not exist in his life but I will support him. 
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student
I bet the support is just good for him *patpat*
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:iconjayebae:
JayeBae Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Hey Flare~!
I wanted to know if you were gonna update his relationships? ;w;
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student
Some time soon hopefully xD I got couple of characters that I should update so sorry!
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Oh its alright! xD Take your time, I was just curious. <3
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student
It is okay <3
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AmethystGlaceon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Flareee. :3 Wanna roleplay with Airpaw?
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student
Hmm why not l3 Could you start?^^ And comments, notes, however for me~
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AmethystGlaceon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, notes then~
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x-RhythemBeta-x Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would you like to RP with Palepaw?
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student
Link the application?
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x-RhythemBeta-x Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Student
Sure! I can start this one...



Burningpaw was sitting beside the fresh-kill pile, staring at the trout that was in it. He had waited for a while wondering whether to eat it or not but had always ended up a bit more. Finally getting bored by waiting, he grabbed the prey and took it a bit further to be eaten.
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Wanna roleplay with my cat Crowpaw? ^w^
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student
Sure~ ^^ Could you start?:3 notes/Comments, either of those are fine for me~
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Of course!
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Crowpaw lifted her nose to the sky, it twitched slightly as she scented the air around her. She was assigned to go hunting with another apprentice, known as Burningpaw. It honestly felt a bit awkward for her, she didn't quite understand why but something about Burningpaw's stare made her very uncomfortable. Maybe she was just anxious about talking to him. She had talked to Shadowpaw before, and Burningpaw seemed quite a bit like Burningpaw attitude wise.

"S-so...Uh, Burningpaw..." Crowpaw began slowly, turning her head around to stare at her partner. "Found anything?" Was all the grey colored she-cat could manage to say, she glanced down at her paws as she awkwardly turned around.
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student
Burningpaw didn't feel any more joy from this assingment; he was only waiting for him to become warrior as soon as possible to reach the age that he truly was in.
"No" He replied simply as he stared down at the water his eyes fixed to the empty stream. He crouched and lifted his paw to strike down the empty water and as surely he caught nothing. Frustrated, he padded off more forwards the upper stream. There must have been fish somewhere since as soon as they were finished the sooner he would get on his own.
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Crowpaw smiled awkwardly. At least he answered her. "Wait up!" She meowed, realizing had began to leave her, she jumped to her paws and padded after him. "Yo-you know, maybe we will have better luck at the lake...?" Crowpaw suggested slowly as she padded beside him. "Of course, there is also the ancient willow, maybe we could have some luck catching a bird or two..." Crowpaw mused, attempting to make conversation while suggesting other hunting places.
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student
"I prefer hunting fishes; as MistClan cats do generally", Burningpaw mewed his gaze straight as he slowed down by the stream and looked down to the stream noticing one shade. "Maybe if we split up maybe we can get this assignment done faster." he added to his sentence before he crouched down and swiftly dived under the water feeling how his teeth got drown into the fish and he returned to the surface.
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JayeBae Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
"Oh, yeah of course! I just thought it would be nice to...." Crowpaw trailed off as Burningpaw spoke again. "Split up...?" she echoed. But, we are supposed to be a team right? What if something happens to one of us? Crowpaw thought, she shook her rapidly. "Sure! If thats what you would like Burningpaw." Crowpaw chirped, ignoring her doubts. "So, I guess we could meet at the ancient willow, if thats okay?" Crowpaw mewed.
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student
Swimming back to the shore, Burningpaw dropped his catch to the ground and shook his short fur to get the extra water out from it. "Sure we can meet there." Burningpaw agreed with a nod before he turned back towards the stream as he was expecting other fishes to come and search for their friend that had suddenly "disappeared". But he didn't by the quick glance spot anything and he let out a unhappy sigh and shook his head. Fish brain...
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BloodknifeOcpony1 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Rp with Sootpaw?
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