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Burningpaw - REF/Application for The-Six-Clans by FlareAKACuteFlareon Burningpaw - REF/Application for The-Six-Clans by FlareAKACuteFlareon
:new:Fixed description and updated his application; I don't care if there is coding mistakes in the description, I have literally given this fixed description for hour and half so Idc now if it doesn't look perfect


Name: Burningpaw
Age: 7moons (7 months)
Gender: Tom

Clan: :bulletblue:MistClan:bulletblue:
Rank: Apprentice


Appearance: Pale Ginger tabby tom with Ginger coloured tail and ears with dark Ginger tabby-markings,  White paws and pale Creamy-Brown eyes


Personality: Burningpaw is straight out said a trouble-maker. After his parents' and siblings' deaths he has lost positive look in the life and in the worst case he releases his pain on others. Maybe once he becomes a warrior he gets to understand world better?

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Family
Brightskies (dead) - Mother
Littlestar (dead) - Father
Vixenkit (dead)  - Sister
Cavernkit (dead) - Brother
Kindlekit (dead???) - Brother (or Sister???)
Carrotkit (dead) - Brother

Mate: **open (Crush part)**
Kits ---

Mentor: Frostfur

Apprentice: **Too young to train any**

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History:

Burningkit was born for Brightskies and Littlestar along with his sibblings, Vixenkit, Carrotkit, Kindlekit and Cavernkit, which Carrotkit and Kindlekit died right away and it didn't take long that also Cavernkit was dead also. Burningkit spent most of his time with Vixenkit or just wondering around the camp.
Littlestar, Burningkit's father, dies and Burningkit gets more determined about his dream to follow his father's pawsteps, no matter what it would take from him.
After Vixenkit's death, Burningkit tried to find someone else or elses to play with him and he soon found himself in a "competion" with Ripplekit, a she-kit younger than him. She though became an apprentice before him and he began to grow jelousity-ship towards her. Just before he was about to get apprentice as well, his mother Brightskies died too, leaving him to be only one left in his family. This drove him into despression that left him in the nursery for one more extra moon.
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After a very long and awaited time, Burningkit becomes finally a Burningpaw and gets Frostfur as his mentor **WIP**

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Relationships:

:bulletwhite:Don't know...
:bulletblue:Friend
:bulletgreen:Good Friend
:bulletyellow:Best Friend
:bulletpink:Crush
:bulletred:Love
:bulletblack:Hate/Jealousy/Dislike
:bulletorange:Respect
:bulletpurple:Family
:heart: Mate

:bulletred:FeatherClan:bulletred:

:bulletyellow:SparkClan:bulletyellow:

:bulletblue:MistClan:bulletblue:

1st thoughts: "I don't know her. I've only seen her in my camp"
2nd thoughts: "

thoughts: "I don't know her enough well too. Just the same as with Moonwing; I've only seen her in the camp"

thoughts: "He's great warrior! He even played with me when I was a kit..."

thoughts: "In the first place, she wouldn't have deserved to become a warrior before me! I should've left the nursery before her and be on the place she's now!"

thoughts: "Ripplewing's brother, I used to play with him when we were kits... We've distanced"

thoughts: "...I still think my father was the best leader this Clan could handle"

thoughts: "...She retried?"

thoughts: "Shadowkit's father...Who's from...ClawClan?"

thoughts: "He's a nice guy! He has got some energy and all...he's good to play/hang out with...We should spend more time"

thoughts: "Ripplewing's friend..."

thoughts: "a tom that Ripplewing used to spend a lot time with..."

:bulletpurple:TornadoClan:bulletpurple:

:bulletblack:ClawClan:bulletblack:

:bulletwhite:Other:bulletwhite:

:bulletgreen:StarClan:bulletgreen:

thoughts: "..."</small>

thoughts: "*sighs*...I am going to follow your pawsteps, father, and I promise to do my best to reach as high as you did"</small>

thoughts: "My bother...who's dead *sigh*"</small>

:bulletgreen::bulletred::bulletpurple:Vixenkit (Kittysprite)</small>
thoughts: "My sister and only she-kit in my litter! She's quiet but I still like to play with her"

thoughts: "Tom I've played few times with... He's also Dewstar's mate"

thoughts: "She's warrior of my Clan! He taught some fishing for me and Ripplepaw. She's nice"

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Other cats of mine in The-Six-Clans

Dustlight - FeatherClan
Duskflower - FeatherClan
Fallpetal - FeatherClan
Sorrelkit - FeatherClan
Flamedapple - SparkClan
Redpaw - SparkClan
Ripplewing - MistClan
Burningpaw - MistClan
Shadestream - TornadoClan
Bluepaw - TornadoClan
Froststar - ClawClan
Blaze - Rogue/Non Clan
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:iconamethystglaceon:
AmethystGlaceon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Flareee. :3 Wanna roleplay with Airpaw?
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Hmm why not l3 Could you start?^^ And comments, notes, however for me~
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:iconamethystglaceon:
AmethystGlaceon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, notes then~
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:iconmusic-soul-eon:
Music-Soul-Eon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would you like to RP with Palepaw?
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Link the application?
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:iconmusic-soul-eon:
Music-Soul-Eon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconjayfeatherisadorable:
Wanna roleplay with my cat Crowpaw? ^w^
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Sure~ ^^ Could you start?:3 notes/Comments, either of those are fine for me~
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:iconjayfeatherisadorable:
Of course!
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Crowpaw lifted her nose to the sky, it twitched slightly as she scented the air around her. She was assigned to go hunting with another apprentice, known as Burningpaw. It honestly felt a bit awkward for her, she didn't quite understand why but something about Burningpaw's stare made her very uncomfortable. Maybe she was just anxious about talking to him. She had talked to Shadowpaw before, and Burningpaw seemed quite a bit like Burningpaw attitude wise.

"S-so...Uh, Burningpaw..." Crowpaw began slowly, turning her head around to stare at her partner. "Found anything?" Was all the grey colored she-cat could manage to say, she glanced down at her paws as she awkwardly turned around.
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Burningpaw didn't feel any more joy from this assingment; he was only waiting for him to become warrior as soon as possible to reach the age that he truly was in.
"No" He replied simply as he stared down at the water his eyes fixed to the empty stream. He crouched and lifted his paw to strike down the empty water and as surely he caught nothing. Frustrated, he padded off more forwards the upper stream. There must have been fish somewhere since as soon as they were finished the sooner he would get on his own.
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