..Picture for one of my High School projects

On 21th of this month, it's going to be ours, High School's, Christmas celebration

One of the turns of the party is video, where's pictures made by those, who're on ArtLine; I'm one of them.
"What's ArtLine?"
I don't know any better English version for it.. But in Finnish it's "Kuvataide linja"
It's our special section and only one in our High School, which means those, who have taken it when they're starting High School, will get all the Art courses being added in their School timetables 
So.. yeah
This is my part for that picture, which our Art Teacher will be editing

Why I uploaded it here is that I like that "glass heart" there

So I wanted to show you guys what
epicness I have done this time
NOTE:
OVER COLOURING, COPYING, TRACING and CLAIMING AS OWN is forbidden and those, who does it, WILL be PUNISHED
Art (c) me
Now i am going to explain why i rate this picture so-so.
The cats are cute ^^ but maybe you could fix the tail XD im not sure what dimension the tail is posed
Originality? not 100% original. I've seen a few pictures that also have two animals sitting together in the snow.
Technique is simple, BUT you could fix the shading ^^ it's hard to see the shading. i suggest you use the blur tool less, because it makes the shading not stand out. and it's night, so the shading for the cats should stand out against the light.
overall, it's pretty good ^^ and i know that your art improved alot. Keep up the good work!!
From Swifty and Snowree XD
I love the snowflakes in the background they are so cute! i love your style of body ginger one but the other the legs kinda look a bit weird but otherwise amazing. i think the snow on the shoulders and top of the heads look a bit silly i think it could of done with some more deatail. I love the golden heart and how their cheeks are touching <3 You have an amazing eye style i LOVE it!! Also i love ho the tails are rapped over each other
Hope this helps x
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