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Heart of Glass, shining like a fire by FlareAKACuteFlareon Heart of Glass, shining like a fire by FlareAKACuteFlareon
..Picture for one of my High School projects :dummy:

On 21th of this month, it's going to be ours, High School's, Christmas celebration :D One of the turns of the party is video, where's pictures made by those, who're on ArtLine; I'm one of them.

"What's ArtLine?"
I don't know any better English version for it.. But in Finnish it's "Kuvataide linja" :D It's our special section and only one in our High School, which means those, who have taken it when they're starting High School, will get all the Art courses being added in their School timetables :meow:

So.. yeah
This is my part for that picture, which our Art Teacher will be editing :D
Why I uploaded it here is that I like that "glass heart" there :happycry: So I wanted to show you guys what epicness I have done this time :XD:

OVER COLOURING, COPYING, TRACING and CLAIMING AS OWN is forbidden and those, who does it, WILL be PUNISHED

Art (c) me
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Okay, I don't write alot of critique's, and I 'm not too good at it, but I'll try! c:

Firstly, I like how you made the snow in the background! I really like it how you didn't make every single snowflake have the same size. I also like how you made their expressions. And I like the markings on the white cat, although they're not realistic, but I don't think it's supposed to be xD

Now for something else, what you could do next time, is maybe make the snow a bit more detailed, give it a bit more shading. Also, since they are sitting in the snow, and it seems like they have been sitting there for a while, maybe make their paws covered in snow, and the spot where their tails touch the ground, too. And for the snow laying on their heads, and tails, maybe make it look a bit less blurry next time.
And one more thing, add a bit more shading, and make it just a bit less blurry, and maybe make the space around them a bit darker, since it's night.

Don't get me wrong though, I really like this picture, it's very cute!
I hope it helped a bit. ^^; Like I said, I'm not that good at giving critique's, and I've got alot to learn myself, but I just wanted to try.
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alright so this is my first critique so bare with me on this!

Firstly, I LOVE the way they touching cheeks! The one eye closed is very cute too ^^ The pattern on the female are lovely as well as the tom. The females isn't very realistic though, but i think that was the point. The eyes, are amazing! They always look so detailed! The tiny little golden heart was very Cute. I like how you made it glow.

The snow is nice, but a moon would have bin great! maybe some stars to show its night. I think the snow on the ground could have bin a bit more detailed, like show some uneven spots and lumps. also where there sitting should have bin indented, as well with the tails.
The snow on the tails, head, and shoulders should have bin thicker. It Kinda looks like fog. The Snowflakes, are amazing! I like how some are bigger and some are very small.

You never fail to amaze me.
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Redfeatherstar Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It is so amazing!! I love the snow, how it falls on them, on the ground, from the sky! The glowing heart is beautiful!
Redfeatherstar Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'Welcome! ^^
DerpyWolf44 May 4, 2013   Digital Artist
umm can i ask who are those two
Just random characters I made up~
DerpyWolf44 May 4, 2013   Digital Artist
SwEeTxPiNk96 Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwww soo cute ^^
PokeAnimalsLover Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hnggghh ton kollin häntä näyttää niin pörröseltä ;-;
Ja agreedaan tuon lasisydämen kans :la:
ja toi lumi...... ;-;
Kiitti :D
Ja pörröseltä?l'3 Puhuitko naaraasta vai justiinsa oikein?xD
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