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Smile shade away by FlareAKACuteFlareon Smile shade away by FlareAKACuteFlareon
Inspiration from this song :meow:


Yeah...
I took up some time and calmed down to think about stuff...So this is kinda vent also
But don't worry! I'm fine now ^^
It was just about some dark thoughts and my dad-relations...so yeah
I'm quite happy by this out-come~ And yeah, my heart is burning still:heart:

Art (c) me
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Okay...long time no giving critiques. Let's start, shall we?

So the first thing to nitice is the anatomy. You have improved a lot. Flare's paws are just in the right size, not too long nor too big. And her head, too. It was well placed, and not too small like sometimes you accidently did (not so many times). Keep up the good work on anatomy girl.

Second is the shading. Pretty simple, but it's fit with the picture. BUT, I think the shading of Flare's neckfluff and tail would need more effort, along the shading of her hair, too. The highlight is also something that makes the whole picture look brighter and better. It gives some dimension, or something like that (sorry, bad english) effect to the picture. Very nice touch indeed.

Third is the heart. I think you may wanna try to give more transparency to the center of the heart. The whole thing is transparent, right? So why not draw it like a bubble? And the fire... It's very awesome. But try to lessen those thin lines of the flame, it will look like some sort of fur or something.

The background is just something simple, but I like it, because it makes the character more stand out and such.

Anyway, very nice job on this one. Keep it up! :heart:
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:iconxxtoxicjellybeanxx:
xXToxicJellyBeanXx Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stop being so amazing, its making me sad D: jk
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student
Sorry but it belongs to my nature :D xD /shot
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:iconxxtoxicjellybeanxx:
xXToxicJellyBeanXx Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X3
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:iconbrakky-zummi:
Brakky-Zummi Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Incredible work!
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student
Thank yew ^^
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:iconbrakky-zummi:
Brakky-Zummi Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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:iconglaceon803:
glaceon803 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   Artist
aww so adorable  =w=
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student
Thanks :D
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:iconglaceon803:
glaceon803 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013   Artist
your welcome  ^ ^
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:iconnazoinu:
Nazoinu Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Oh this is just...Beautiful! :D Great work!
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student
Thanks :D
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:iconnazoinu:
Nazoinu Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
You're welcome! :D
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:iconcheisupoochy:
CheisuPoochy Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Glad to know you're better, and as always fantastic job ^^
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
Thanks ^^
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:iconxxitalromenxx:
xXItalRomEnXx Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG beautiful owo i lova thisssssss
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
Thanks~
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:iconxxitalromenxx:
xXItalRomEnXx Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem
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:iconrellal:
Rellal Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, Flare. This is beautiful!  And you're heart burns when its sad too?I thought it was just me ^^;
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
Thanks :D
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:iconrellal:
Rellal Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem~
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:iconsnowlilies:
SnowLilies Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woman, why are you so talented?! Ox xDDD this is amazing.
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
Naww thankies Snow~
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:iconsnowlilies:
SnowLilies Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problemo. :meow:
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:iconelotryoshkanyah:
ElOTryOshKAnyAh Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I haven't the word... ._.
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
...:meow:
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:iconsmb101:
SMB101 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013

Awwww.

Cute.

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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
Thanks ^^
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:iconeeveestarluver:
Eeveestarluver Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The lighting in this is beautiful! I love how the heart looks and HOW YOUR STYLE FITS TO ANY KIND OF SHADING HOW DO YOU DO IT WOMAN
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student
Thanks :la:
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:icondirkalc:
DirkaLc Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AWESOME! Teach me your drawing style. XD
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student
Thanks~ ^^ And nope :I That's something I won't do
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:iconthetattuska:
TheTattuska Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Voi. Hyvä. Luoja.
Toi kuva on vaan liian upea. Kaikki noi valostukset(?) Ja carjostukset ja toi sydän ja kaikki on vaan niin täydellisesti tässä kuvassa.
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student
Kiitos ^^
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:iconthetattuska:
TheTattuska Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ei mitään.
Enkä mä pysty vieläkään lopettamaan ton kuvan tuijottamista :iconiloveitplz:
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:iconcrystalsprite:
CrystalSprite Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Just stunning, this picture is like perfect Flare! Glad your okay! :D
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student
Thank yew :D
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:iconcrystalsprite:
CrystalSprite Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Anytime! xxx
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:iconanxious-chimera:
Anxious-Chimera Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very, very pretty! uwu
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student
Thanks ^^
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:icongiazia-cinnabon:
GIazia-Cinnabon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Aww, I'm happy you're okay Flare c: and I love this picture, so pretty ^u^
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:iconflareakacuteflareon:
FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student
Aww thankies :hug:
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:icongiazia-cinnabon:
GIazia-Cinnabon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
:huggle:
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:iconstormerrr96:
Stormerrr96 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Looks wonderfull Flare~ ^-^ The Heart Looks great :3 also the FYIAHH
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FlareAKACuteFlareon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student
Thankies Storm~
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:iconstormerrr96:
Stormerrr96 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
No Problem~
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