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July 21, 2013
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Smile shade away by FlareAKACuteFlareon Smile shade away by FlareAKACuteFlareon
Inspiration from this song :meow:

I took up some time and calmed down to think about stuff...So this is kinda vent also
But don't worry! I'm fine now ^^
It was just about some dark thoughts and my yeah
I'm quite happy by this out-come~ And yeah, my heart is burning still:heart:

Art (c) me
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Okay...long time no giving critiques. Let's start, shall we?

So the first thing to nitice is the anatomy. You have improved a lot. Flare's paws are just in the right size, not too long nor too big. And her head, too. It was well placed, and not too small like sometimes you accidently did (not so many times). Keep up the good work on anatomy girl.

Second is the shading. Pretty simple, but it's fit with the picture. BUT, I think the shading of Flare's neckfluff and tail would need more effort, along the shading of her hair, too. The highlight is also something that makes the whole picture look brighter and better. It gives some dimension, or something like that (sorry, bad english) effect to the picture. Very nice touch indeed.

Third is the heart. I think you may wanna try to give more transparency to the center of the heart. The whole thing is transparent, right? So why not draw it like a bubble? And the fire... It's very awesome. But try to lessen those thin lines of the flame, it will look like some sort of fur or something.

The background is just something simple, but I like it, because it makes the character more stand out and such.

Anyway, very nice job on this one. Keep it up! :heart:
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xXToxicJellyBeanXx Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stop being so amazing, its making me sad D: jk
Sorry but it belongs to my nature :D xD /shot
xXToxicJellyBeanXx Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brakky-Zummi Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Incredible work!
Brakky-Zummi Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
aww so adorable  =w=
your welcome  ^ ^
Nazoinu Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh this is just...Beautiful! :D Great work!
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